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Thetable compares the proportion of the sport participation in 5 dissimilar sports of school aged boys in two different groups in the UK in the year 2010, aged 6 to 11 and 12 to 16. The five sports are football, basketball, cricket, rugby and swimming.
Overall, the boys with age between 6 and 11 had highlier percentage of sport participation than the other. In both of two age groups, football was the most popular sport.
Football was the sport had greatest percentage in two age groups. In particular, the boys with age from 6 to 11 and the other had 87% and 78%, respectively. Cricket was the second most popular sport in all of boys. However, the percentage of the boy aged 6 to 11 was higher than that of the boy with age between 12 and 16 9%.
In comparison with age group from 6 to 11, the other had lower proportion of basketball participation, exactly 10%. The figure for rugby participation in boys 6 – 11 was greater than the older boys 2%. Swimming was the only sport had the same percentage of participation in both of age groups.
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