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Vicky 99 Posted 18 years ago
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please help me correct my grammer

0 Our daily life has being significantly changed by computers. They can be seen all around us, in school, in business, and even in many homes. It seems that there is no field or aspect of life today that has not been affect by this new technology. When we go shopping, do our banking or any other business, or register for courses, the calculations is made by computers. Computers are often involve when we buy a book or order a sweater from a catalog. Children use them now for games and at least active instead of just watching a TV show.02br
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00 As this technology develops and progresses. computers will become more and more available to people. This availability is going make the impact of the computer even more significantly in the net ten years. Our lives and our children's lives will definitely be affected. What we don't know is whether the effect will be good or bad. 0-
  

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02br 01i 00I have underlined some problem areas, Vicky:02i 02br 02br 00Our daily life 01u 00has being02u 00 significantly changed by computers. They can be seen all around us, in school, in business, and even in many homes. It seems that there is no field or aspect of life today that 01u 00has02u 00 not 01u 00been affect02u 00 by this new technology.

  • 02br 01i 00I have underlined some problem areas, Vicky:02i 02br 02br 00Our daily life 01u 00has being02u 00 significantly changed by computers.
  • They can be seen all around us, in school, in business, and even in many homes.
  • It seems that there is no field or aspect of life today that 01u 00has02u 00 not 01u 00been affect02u 00 by this new technology.
  • When we go shopping, do our banking or any other business, or register for courses, the 01u 00calculations is02u 00 made by computers.
  • Computers 01u 00are02u 00 often01u 00 involve02u 00 when we buy a book or order a sweater from a catalog.
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