Please help me correct my essay, This is my fourth essay I have writen on this topic

Topic: The maps below show the changes of an island. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

My essay:

The two maps show a same island with a beach locatend on the west end and some palm trees growing on it. The difference between two maps is: the first one show an uninhabited isand and the second one show the same island after development.

The first map shows a low-lying island with a beach located in the west of the island and the presence of some palm trees on it.

The second map illustrates show the island after it has been turned completely into a resort complex. There exists lots of tourism fancilities which can be seen. The resort complex consists of two accommodations in form of huts and three buildings: a reception, a restautant and a pier. The first accommodation including five huts is located in the west whereas the nine-huts accommodation is located at the opposite direction. There is a footpath connecting the five huts toghether and leading to a swimming beach. There is also a vehicular track surrounding the reception building and leading to a pier where boats can dock.