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Nowadays, food has become easier to prepare. Has this change improved the way people live? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

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Food is a part of our life and we have to use it every day. Preparing food is important for a good meal, too. Nowadays, it seems easier to prepare food that is improved the way people live a lots.
Before, preparing food costs too much time because it has many process. When preparing food easier so it does not waste time. Anyone can prepare food as the man and child. People can work more and do more thing. Parents do not have to worry when they can’t stay at home to care their childs. Additionally, when preparing food easier, people have time to do other things as playing sports, hanging out with friends, learning more and working more. When preparing is not a big problem, we can take it anywhere and faster. It is so convenient as when we going to travel, too.

AlpheccaStars · Accepted Answer

Food is a part of our life and we have to use it every day. (Better: we have to eat every day.) Preparing food is important for a good meal, too. Nowadays, it seems easier to prepare food and that has improved the way people live a lot..
Before, preparing food cost too much time because it had many processes. (before requires you to use the past tense) ~~When preparing food easier so it does not waste time.~~ If food is easier to prepare, you don't waste as much time. Anyone, man or child, can prepare food ~~as the man and child~~. People can work more and do more things. Parents do not have to worry when they can’t stay at home to care for (take care of) their children. Additionally, when preparing food is easier, people have time to do other things as playing sports, hanging out with friends, learning more and working more. When preparing food is not a big problem, we can take it anywhere and have it ready faster. It is so convenient as when we going to travel, too.

Son Tung Nguyen Trong · Answer

Thank you very much. I've read more and edited it. Please take a look.

Food is a part of our life and we have to eat every day. Preparing food is important for a good meal, too. Nowadays, it seems easier to prepare food that improved the way people live a lots..
Before, preparing food wasted too much time because it had many process. If food is easier to prepare, you don't waste as much time. A person who does not know how to prepare his/her own food would go to a restaurant where food is served everyday. But with the advanced food preservation technology, now he is free, completely independent of restaurants and other places . He can prepare own food and enjoy the feeling of “home, sweet home”. With parents, they do not have to worry when they can’t stay at home to care for their children.For people at work, life has just become easy for them. They will not have to worry all day long about what they are going to prepare for their supper.When preparing food is not a big problem, we can take it anywhere and have it ready faster. We can use time for hobbies as playing sports, hanging out with friends, learning more It is so convenient as when we going to travel, too.
Nutritious food is very essential for life, food has been the cause of many a battle. In general this new way of preparing food has helped those who are concerned about their daily meals- almost everyone.

AlpheccaStars · Answer

a lots. - a lot. (a + singular)

He eats a lot of food.
He eats lots of food.

He can prepare own food - He can prepare his own food.

We can use time for hobbies as playing sports, hanging out with friends, learning more (missing punctuation) It is so convenient as when we going to travel, too.

Nutritious food is very essential for life, (comma splice, You have to use a period or semicolon here) food

Son Tung Nguyen Trong · Answer

Thanks a lot. You had a great skill. I have not already understood about a period or semicolon but I corrected following you.
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Food is a part of our life and we have to eat every day. Preparing food is important for a good meal, too. Nowadays, it seems easier to prepare food that improved the way people live a lot..
Before, preparing food wasted too much time because it had many process. If food is easier to prepare, you don't waste as much time. A person who does not know how to prepare his/her own food would go to a restaurant where food is served everyday. But with the advanced food preservation technology, now he is free, completely independent of restaurants and other places . He can prepare his own food and enjoy the feeling of “home, sweet home”. With parents, they do not have to worry when they can’t stay at home to care for their children.For people at work, life has just become easy for them. They will not have to worry all day long about what they are going to prepare for their supper.When preparing food is not a big problem, we can take it anywhere and have it ready faster. We can use time for hobbies as playing sports, hanging out with friends, learning more. It is so convenient as when we going to travel, too.

Nutritious food is very essential for life;food has been the cause of many a battle. In general this new way of preparing food has helped those who are concerned about their daily meals- almost everyone

Son Tung Nguyen Trong · Answer

Can you continue correct essay for me Alphecca Stars. Thanks a lot.

It has been said, “Not everything that is learned is contained in books”. Compare and contrast knowledge gained from experience with knowledge gained from books. In your opinion, which source is more important? Why?

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It has been said, “Not everything that is learned is contained in books”. In my opinion, this is true.
___ Firstly, books contained a huge of knowledge and books are great source of information. A person in his lifetime can not experience everything, but by reading a book on particular subject he can gain knowledge over that subject in less time. However knowledge gained from books just still are theories. Sometimes, it can not apply in real life. But through experience all of the knowledge is use full. That is things we got from actual life. Secondly, experience is things we done and got knowledge from our tasks so all of them can be use. As a programmer, through books I got a lot of rules of code, syntax and examples that I remembered so much but it still not enough. I have to apply code in practical and this step is the most important tasks. I got many errors, problems need to solve. Then, I could select the best choice for my coding. So if I just read book I don’t know what is the best choices for my coding and I have to remember a lot of things. When I get more experience, my tasks is more easier. Moreover, many skills and knowledge can only be learned through practical experiences. You cannot learn swimming by just reading from books on how to swim. You have to get there and jump into the pool. Experience is the best way to develop your personal abilities. Thirdly, the knowledge learnt from experience is stayed in our memory for a long period of time. There is a book need a week for reading but we need a year, even some years to apply and get experience from it. The conclusion that we draw from what we learn would be from practical experience instead of accepting the conclusion draw in the book by author.
__ Therefore, knowledge can be gained both by reading books and by experience but the knowledge gained through experience is more important.

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