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Alc24 Posted 16 years ago
Grammar

Please help me correct my corrections?

Could you tell me if my corrections are correct and how to make them sound grammatical?

1 The producers didn't put him the first episode (just/only) to kill him off at the end of the second episode. NOT SURE
2 I start liking the show more once they start going to school. OK
3 Not once during the (course of the) show does him find himself struggling to pay his rent. (show) BRACKETS OPTIONAL
4 I've never gone to work this tired. OK I THINK
5 I like my hair like this more/I like my hair more like this. BOTH 2nd BETTER
6 Do you get paid the same hourly rate whether/if you are here or there? NOT SURE HOW TO SAY

Thank you
  

Top answer

1 in the first episode 2 started to like the show - started going 3 he find himself 4 ok 5 right 6 hourly rate no matter where you are (suggest)

  • 1 in the first episode 2 started to like the show - started going 3 he find himself 4 ok 5 right 6 hourly rate no matter where you are (suggest)
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1 in the first episode

2 started to like the show - started going

3 he find himself

4 ok

5 right

6 hourly rate no matter where you are (suggest)

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