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PreciousJones Posted 15 years ago
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Here's the death certificate of my grandmother as I promised. I know abrupt flight schedule changes may 'cause an inconvenience to the Airline and some of the patrons, but there must be a milder way to handle these types of "emergency" situations. Just a few months ago I had to re-schedule an airline booking to another date because of complications that had occured in my family and I was asked to show proof of the deceased. I'm sure it's usually already hard enough for someone to lose a loved one and to have to openly share it to the public because of a change in flight booking is to me considered insensitive and below the standard professional courtesy.
Please refund me the penalty fee I was charged
Please correct this paragraph.
Thank you.
Please refund me the penalty fee I was charged
Please correct this paragraph.
Thank you.
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Hi Precious; It can be made much more effective by a more logical flow of ideas. 1) State exactly what you are asking for and provide evidence. 2) Complain about the policy 3) Ask for a confirmation For example point #1 can be stated this way: Just a few months ago I had to re-schedule an airline booking because of a death in my family and I was charged a rebooking penalty.
- Hi Precious; It can be made much more effective by a more logical flow of ideas.
- 1) State exactly what you are asking for and provide evidence.
- 2) Complain about the policy 3) Ask for a confirmation For example point #1 can be stated this way: Just a few months ago I had to re-schedule an airline booking because of a death in my family and I was charged a rebooking penalty.
- ) When I protested, the agent promised a refund of the penalty if I provided a death certificate.
- Attached is a copy of the death certificate of my grandmother as I promised.
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Hi Precious;
It can be made much more effective by a more logical flow of ideas.
1) State exactly what you are asking for and provide evidence.
2) Complain about the policy
3) Ask for a confirmation
For example point #1 can be stated this way:
Just a few months ago I had to re-schedule an airline booking because of a death in my family and I wa
It can be made much more effective by a more logical flow of ideas.
1) State exactly what you are asking for and provide evidence.
2) Complain about the policy
3) Ask for a confirmation
For example point #1 can be stated this way:
Just a few months ago I had to re-schedule an airline booking because of a death in my family and I wa
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