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Alc24 Posted 16 years ago
Grammar

Please help me correct few sentences (While vs AS, With vs FOR)

Could you help me correct these few sentences please?

1 The less you use your computer while it's charging the faster it charges. If you use it as/while you charge/are charging it, the battery wont charge as fast.
2 I have enough battery to last me until I get home.
3 Do all your work, that way they have nothing to reproach you for/with.

4 I gave him the first itinerary I saw. It wasn't necessarily that fastest way to the airport, but it was the first route I saw looking at the map. I didn't want to spend ten minute trying to find him the fastest way to the airport.

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1 The less you use your computer while it's charging ,(add comma) the faster it charges. If you use it while you are charging it, the battery won't (a contraction-it has an apostrophe) charge as fast. 2 I have enough battery to last me until I get home.

  • 1 The less you use your computer while it's charging ,(add comma) the faster it charges.
  • If you use it while you are charging it, the battery won't (a contraction-it has an apostrophe) charge as fast.
  • 2 I have enough battery to last me until I get home.
  • (Note: it's is actually 'battery power', but colloquially, we shorten it to just 'battery'.
  • ) 3 Do all your work - that way they have nothing to reproach you for.
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1 The less you use your computer while it's charging,(add comma) the faster it charges. If you use it while you are charging it, the battery won't(a contraction-it has an apostrophe) charge as fast.

2 I have enough battery to last me until I get home.
(Note: it's is actually 'battery power', but colloquially, we shorten it to just 'battery'. The sentence is correct.)
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1 The less you use your computer while it's charging, the faster it charges. If you use the battery while it charges, it won't charge as quickly.

2 I have enough battery to last me until I get home.

3 Do all your work and your effort is beyond reproach.

4 I gave him the first itinerary I saw. It wasn't necessarily the fastest way to the airport, merely the fastest

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