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Alc24 Posted 16 years ago
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Please help me correct email
Could you please help me correct this email. If you could tell me if there are grammatical errors.
Hello,
Let me start off by telling you how wonderful it is to read an email that makes you want to be the day of. My fiancé and I have been looking for a photographer for the past 3 months, one who doesn't take your boring run of the mill photos. We were looking at your site and thought your work was amazing. Only problem is that our budget won't allow it. My fiancé and I are 24 and 22 and our budget is very tight. We had set aside 700 euros for a photographer, looking at your site and since our wedding is a once in a lifetime thing and who better to capture that moment than you, decided we could spend somewhat more. So my question to you is if we could tailor the package to our budget, maybe have you guys stay 5 hours instead of 10. We need you for the first half of the day; for the church and for the preparation leading up to the church etc. Less post production.... I don't presume to tell you how to do your job, I was just wondering if that could be a possibility.
Regards,
Thank you
Hello,
Let me start off by telling you how wonderful it is to read an email that makes you want to be the day of. My fiancé and I have been looking for a photographer for the past 3 months, one who doesn't take your boring run of the mill photos. We were looking at your site and thought your work was amazing. Only problem is that our budget won't allow it. My fiancé and I are 24 and 22 and our budget is very tight. We had set aside 700 euros for a photographer, looking at your site and since our wedding is a once in a lifetime thing and who better to capture that moment than you, decided we could spend somewhat more. So my question to you is if we could tailor the package to our budget, maybe have you guys stay 5 hours instead of 10. We need you for the first half of the day; for the church and for the preparation leading up to the church etc. Less post production.... I don't presume to tell you how to do your job, I was just wondering if that could be a possibility.
Regards,
Thank you
Top answer
Let me start off by telling you how wonderful it is to read an email in which you expres that you want to be part of our special day. My fiance and I have been looking for a photographer for the past 3 months, one who doesn't take your boring run-of-the-mill photos. We were looking at your site and thought your work was amazing.
- Let me start off by telling you how wonderful it is to read an email in which you expres that you want to be part of our special day.
- My fiance and I have been looking for a photographer for the past 3 months, one who doesn't take your boring run-of-the-mill photos.
- We were looking at your site and thought your work was amazing.
- The only problem is that our budget won't allow it.
- My fiance and I are 24 and 22, and our budget is very tight.
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Let me start off by telling you how wonderful it is to read an email in which you expres that you want to be part of our special day. My fiance and I have been looking for a photographer for the past 3 months, one who doesn't take your boring run-of-the-mill photos. We were looking at your site and thought your work was amazing. The only problem is that our budget won't allow it. My fiance and I
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