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Shally2609 Posted 6 years ago
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PLEASE HELP ME CORRECT ACADEMICALLY THESE PARAPHRASING SENTENCES

  1. In general, female birds are less colorful than male birds.
    - In common, male birds are more multicolored than female birds.

  2. A handshake does not mean the same thing around the world.
    - A handshake does not share the same meaning across the globe.

  3. Trip 5th grade students are the best students in all of Gwinnett county.
    - The best students among all of Gwinnett county are known as trip 5th grade students.

  4. Climbing mountains is a dangerous activity.
    - One of dangerous activities is climbing mountains.
  5. His job wasn't very interesting, but it paid well.

    - He has a well-paid job although it does not stimulate him.

    THANKS!
  

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Phuong Nguyen 1550 In common, male birds are more multicolored than female birds. - "In common" is wrong. You can use, for example, "Broadly speaking" or "Usually".

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  • Phuong Nguyen 1550 In common, male birds are more multicolored than female birds.
  • - "In common" is wrong.
  • You can use, for example, "Broadly speaking" or "Usually".
  • - "multicolored" doesn't have the same meaning as "colorful".
  • Try "brightly/brilliantly colored" instead.
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Phuong Nguyen 1550 In common, male birds are more multicolored than female birds.

- "In common" is wrong. You can use, for example, "Broadly speaking" or "Usually".

- "multicolored" doesn't have the same meaning as "colorful". Try "brightly/brilliantly colored" instead.

Phuong Nguyen 1550 Trip 5th grade students are
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  • In general, female birds are less colorful than male birds.
    - In common, Usually, male birds are more multicolored than female birds.

  • A handshake does not mean the same thing around the world.
    - A handshake does not share the same meaning across the globe.

  • Trip 5th grade students are the best students in all of Gwinnett county.
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