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Alc24 Posted 15 years ago
Grammar

Please help me correct 3 very short sentences?

Could you please help me correct these sentences grammatically?

1 It would be wrong of me to do that.

2 That's how much money I've secured myself this deal.

3 I don't deserve such things happen to me.

Thank you
  

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It would be wrong (for me) to do that. That's how much money I've secured for myself in this deal. I don't deserve such things happening to me.

  • It would be wrong (for me) to do that.
  • That's how much money I've secured for myself in this deal.
  • I don't deserve such things happening to me.
  • (deserve in this case sounds off) I don't deserve such treatment.
  • (having something bad done to you) I don't understanding why such things happens to me.
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It would be wrong (for me) to do that.

That's how much money I've secured for myself in this deal.

I don't deserve such things happening to me. (deserve in this case sounds off)

I don't deserve such treatment. (having something bad done to you)

I don't understanding why such things happens to me. (unlucky--> there is no deserving bad luck unless you are
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hi there

like what you say

I don't understanding why such things happens to me.

I thought it was ''understand'' (Verb bare)?
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I don't understand why such things happen to me.
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i'll remember that

thanks anyway Emotion: smile
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Thank you,

Alphecca, Could ask you what you think of these 2

2 That's how much money I've secured (for) myself from/in this deal. (how would you say this?)

3 I don't deserve to have such things happen to me. (is this natural?

Thank you so much
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Woops! 2 major grammar mistakes. Emotion: sad

I will be more careful next time~~
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Hello Holyduke,

I'm not even sure you made a mistake, which is why I was asking Alphecca, he could tell us for sure, what do you think Holyduke,

Would you leave the FOR

- That's how much money I've secured (for) myself from/in this deal. (how would you say this?)

and what do you think about this one?

- I don't deserve to have such things happen t
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"On behalf of or to the benefit of (someone or something)"

-google dictionary

So I choose the prep "for" and I wouldn't left it out.

- I don't deserve to have such things happen to me. (is this natural? [....happening to me.] sounds ok.

Sorry for the late reply, I don't usually use English Forum on Wednesdays and Thursdays

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