Please help me corect my writing task 1| Cam 13 Test 1 Writing Task 1

Topic: The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The two given maps illustrate the transformation of the road system around the city hospital between 2007 and 2010

As can be seen, the map became more complex on the ground that so many constructions have been erected in the period of three years.

In 2007, City Hospital was surrounded by Ring Road and in front of Hospital Road with six bus stops along to. To the East of it, there was a parking place for both staff and the public who move by their private vehicles.

Three years later, the most striking change is the appearance of two new roundabouts. One was introduced at the entrance of the hospital and the other was in the intersection between City road and Hospital road. Near to the hospital, across the Ring Road, a new car park was introduced for only the public, the existing one was restricted for only staff. On the opposite side of it, a bus station was erected to displace all of the buses stops at both sides of Hospital Road.