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Golf_mflu Posted 18 years ago
Grammar

PLEASE HELP ME CLARIFY THIS OBSTACLE

Thanks for your time >>> SORRY FOR MY LANGUAGE IF IT IS UNSUITABLE

I still have a confusing word and not quite sure which word to use in this sentence.

My MINI-THESIS aims to assess the potential of the cooperatives who want to sell their processed-garlic products to the supermarket.

Overall operation along their supply chain are involved.

So, I wonder which appropriate preposition and vocabulary should be used to fulfill the sentence.

Please give me an advise. The sentence is as below (RED BOLD).

with regard
Golf

Thailand


Potentiality on Garlic Supply Chain Management to Supermarket of

The Fang District Garlic Producers Cooperative,
  

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Hi, I still have a confusing word and not quite sure which word to use in this sentence. My MINI-THESIS aims to assess the potential of the cooperatives who want to sell their processed-garlic products to the supermarket. Somewhere, you need to explain what kind of potentiality you are assessing.

  • Hi, I still have a confusing word and not quite sure which word to use in this sentence.
  • My MINI-THESIS aims to assess the potential of the cooperatives who want to sell their processed-garlic products to the supermarket.
  • Somewhere, you need to explain what kind of potentiality you are assessing.
  • eg Is it related to product quality?
  • Product quantity?
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Hi,

I still have a confusing word and not quite sure which word to use in this sentence.

My MINI-THESIS aims to assess the potential of the cooperatives who want to sell their processed-garlic products to the supermarket. Somewhere, you need to explain what kind of potentiality you are assessing. eg Is it related to product quality? Product quantity? Reliability of supply? Future

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