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It is generally believed that some people are born with certain talents, for instance for sport or music, and others are not. However, it is sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sports person or musician.

Some people in the world were newborns with innate talents especially. Some individuals are certainly good at sport, music, art and other abilities they have. However, I would argue both sides of the arguments and give my opinion.

Firstly, few children are born with a talent. For instance, I saw a little girl is only 4 years old coming from Russia who could speak 7 languages on a Russian television program or a three-year-old child can play multiple drums at the same time as a professional musician. I am confident that a child can not learn such skills at the age of three or four years old. Maybe, they are inherited from their parents because it is not surprising when the son of the famous singer can also sing well and they achieve many prizes when they are young.

In contrast to this, in the world, there are many people who differ from their family, people who are taught with professional and systematic training. Each one may become the surprisingly brilliant person in not only academic but also entertainment field. Those who are are likely to succeed in the later day. As a result, if not having innate talents, they could study hard to become proficient in their fields that they pursue. For example, many singers were not a genius when they were born, but along with their endless effort and learning, until now they become famous singers around the world.

I truly believe that talent can be produced by passion and dedication. We would not have some the greatest talents like Tom Cruise, Leonardo Dicaprio. If they stopped trying after their initial failures, they would not have the prizes grand.

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