Please help me check this short essay about smoking -100 words)
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Please help me check this short essay about smoking.
There are several advantages and disadvantages in smoking. Nowadays, people become busier and busier with their lives lead to many stressfulness. Because of that reason, they find many ways to clear stress and subsequently, they smoke cigarettes.As we known, cigarettes used to help people reduce stress, feel more comfortable, thinking more clearly when they have something to solve. On the other hand, tobacco also bring us a lot of disadvantages but there are many main consequences such as bad for our livers, teeth become yellowish. In conclusion, smoking has both benefits and bad for our health. Before you smoke, just remind your mind, the more cigarettes you smoke, the shorter life long you get.
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There are several advantages and disadvantages in smoking. Nowadays, people become busier and busier with their lives lead to many stressfulness. As we known , (wrong form) cigarettes used to help people reduce stress, feel more comfortable, (missing word) thinking (wrong form) more clearly when they have something to solve.
- There are several advantages and disadvantages in smoking.
- Nowadays, people become busier and busier with their lives lead to many stressfulness.
- As we known , (wrong form) cigarettes used to help people reduce stress, feel more comfortable, (missing word) thinking (wrong form) more clearly when they have something to solve.
- On the other hand, tobacco also bring (wrong form) us a lot of disadvantages but there are many main consequences such as bad for our livers , (wrong phrasing) teeth become yellowish .
- In conclusion, smoking has both benefits and bad for our health.
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There are several advantages and disadvantages in smoking. Nowadays, people become busier and busier with their lives lead to many stressfulness. (ungrammatical sentence structure) Because of that reason, they find many ways to clear
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