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Topic : Some students prefer to study alone. Others prefer to study with a group of students. Which do you prefer?

Knowledge is endless in our lives , so we can see how much influence learning has on human beings. Maybe studying is the most way to achive our goals and dreams . Many students prefer to study alone but others not. In my opinion , I prefer to studying with a group for these reasons.

First of all,study group is a modern form of learning that is widely applied, it teaches you lots of useful soft skills such as teamwork skills, leadership skills, … Such as , we have hard homework and if we work together,we resolve it faster than studying alone.

Secondly, as for knowledge, when learning a group you will gain more ideas as well as information from other friends in the group , speed up the learning process , solve the problem . Although I also know that study group will lead to problems such as idea disorders, as too much information is given and there will be dependents on this without thinking, seeking more information.

Thirdly,studying in a group also gives us experience how to interact with each other . Nowadays, many work depends on how we deal with others . Remember this "Want to go fast, go alone,want to go away, must go together" !

In conclusion , study group helps us gain self-confidence and experience which is useful in my careers in my future . So that's reason why I fascinate studying in group more.