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Anonymous Posted 19 years ago
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Please help me check this letter (ielts task 1)
0 Hi all, I wrote this letter that is an ielts writing task 1. So please help me check it. Thank you all guys so much! 02 br
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00 Dear Sir or Madam, 02 br
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00 My name is ABC, your customer, who supposed to take the train that was delayed this morning at 7.am. So I write this letter just to let you know about my situation, and I wonder that you can help me deal with my problem. 02 br
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00 This morning, I had an appointment with a company for a job interview. It is very important to me, so I decided to take earliest train this morning to get this appointment 00 ’ 00 s place on time. But unfortunately, the train I have taken was delayed. So I can 00 ’ 00 t afford to get there on time. That is why I need your help to deal with my situation. And the thing I would like to be helped is your confirmed letter that strongly submits my troubles. It is very helpful to me to get the company 00 ’ 00 s understanding on that situation. Please send me your feedback as soon as possible. I am looking forward to hearing from you. 02 br
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00 Best regards, 02 br
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00 Dear Sir or Madam, 02 br
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00 My name is ABC, your customer, who supposed to take the train that was delayed this morning at 7.am. So I write this letter just to let you know about my situation, and I wonder that you can help me deal with my problem. 02 br
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00 This morning, I had an appointment with a company for a job interview. It is very important to me, so I decided to take earliest train this morning to get this appointment 00 ’ 00 s place on time. But unfortunately, the train I have taken was delayed. So I can 00 ’ 00 t afford to get there on time. That is why I need your help to deal with my situation. And the thing I would like to be helped is your confirmed letter that strongly submits my troubles. It is very helpful to me to get the company 00 ’ 00 s understanding on that situation. Please send me your feedback as soon as possible. I am looking forward to hearing from you. 02 br
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00 Best regards, 02 br
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1 font 00 As this is for a test, I have highlighted below some areas you need to look at again. 00 am. 02 br 02 br 00 This morning, I had an appointment with a company for a job interview.
- 1 font 00 As this is for a test, I have highlighted below some areas you need to look at again.
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- 02 br 02 br 00 This morning, I had an appointment with a company for a job interview.
- It 00 is 00 very important to me, so I decided to take earliest train this morning to 00 get this appointment 00 ’ 00 s place on time 00 .
- 00 But 00 unfortunately, the train 00 I have taken 00 was delayed.
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1 font 00 As this is for a test, I have highlighted below some areas you need to look at again. Your letter also does not make it clear what you expect the person to whom you are writing to provide. 02 font 02 br
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0 Hi Ruby Rose, 00 thank you so much for helping me. I've learned something from your post, it's great. 00 0-
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