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Anonymous Posted 19 years ago
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Please help me check this letter (ielts task 1)

0Hi all, I wrote this letter that is an ielts writing task 1. So please help me check it. Thank you all guys so much!02br
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00Dear Sir or Madam,02br
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00My name is ABC, your customer, who supposed to take the train that was delayed this morning at 7.am. So I write this letter just to let you know about my situation, and I wonder that you can help me deal with my problem.02br
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00This morning, I had an appointment with a company for a job interview. It is very important to me, so I decided to take earliest train this morning to get this appointment00’00s place on time. But unfortunately, the train I have taken was delayed. So I can00’00t afford to get there on time. That is why I need your help to deal with my situation. And the thing I would like to be helped is your confirmed letter that strongly submits my troubles. It is very helpful to me to get the company00’00s understanding on that situation. Please send me your feedback as soon as possible. I am looking forward to hearing from you.02br
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00Best regards,02br
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00ABC.0-
  

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1font 00As this is for a test, I have highlighted below some areas you need to look at again. 00am. 02br 02br 00This morning, I had an appointment with a company for a job interview.

  • 1font 00As this is for a test, I have highlighted below some areas you need to look at again.
  • 00am.
  • 02br 02br 00This morning, I had an appointment with a company for a job interview.
  • It 00is 00very important to me, so I decided to take earliest train this morning to 00get this appointment00’00s place on time00.
  • 00But 00unfortunately, the train 00I have taken00 was delayed.
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1font00As this is for a test, I have highlighted below some areas you need to look at again. Your letter also does not make it clear what you expect the person to whom you are writing to provide.02font02br
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00Dear Sir or Madam,02br
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00My name is ABC, your customer, 00who supposed00 to take the train tha
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0 Hi Ruby Rose, 00thank you so much for helping me. I've learned something from your post, it's great.00 0-

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