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Topic : Childhood obesity is becoming a serious problem in many countries. Explain the
main causes and effects of this problem, and suggest some possible solutions.

The prevenlance of over weight in adult are still concerned in many countries over the world , however this obesity situation in children become more and more serious and it effects largely to enconomise , health care, and development of each country . Hence, This assay will discuss the main reason and effects of this prolem and gives the useful solutions for individuals and social community
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There are several causes lead to the childhood overweight . Firsly , Using the excess high callorie, high fat foods such meal, beef, or high sugar drinks and less eating fruit and vegetables result in gaining weight fastly. The recent reseaches demontrates that intake of meal, beef and soda or high sugar bevarages after 7 hour in the evening will increase the accumulate fatty in liver and stomach, , thereby putting it on weigh. Secondly, the physical activities impact directly to weight. In detai , less physical activities and spending more time on participating in sedentary activities such as watching Tv, playing game leading to slow energy expenditrure ; this cause overweight. Final, parent's lifestyle contribute to build the children's behaviour and eating hatbitat in daily meal. Regularly, parents are always people who choose and determind the kind of food , drink and sometime they force their children eatng more than normal to grow further . After alls, consequence of obesity is that they are at increased risk for a number of disease including type 2 diabetes, nutritional disorder, hypertension, cardio diseases .

There are some tips for parents and caregiver in preventing overweight in children. Firstly, the parents should set up a healthy diet. Instead of using high protein foods, high sugar ,high fatty, they should add more fruits and vegetable for every meals. Physical activities is very important , so that parents should encourage children positively taking part in outdoor or indoor sports like football, volleyball , swimming,.. Beside , gorverment and health care ogarnization and school give the consistent policiy to reduce maximum the childhood obesity such as supporting for social marketing intended to promote healthful food choices and increased physical activity , often update the diseases and serious outcomes to the community.
In conclution, childhood obesity are really concerned problem and the outcomes leaved is very serious. hence, each individual , children or their parents and community are responsible for limit the increasing of this problem.