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In our temporary life, there are increasingly common to hear parents who want to have children later in their lives. In my opinion, this trend has been caused by various reasons relating the modern life and posed many negative also positive effects in equal measure.

On the first hand, there are various reasons that could be explained for the current tendency of many parents. It is undeniable fact that giving birth means that parents have already take the shoulder the burden of financial budgets which would be allocated for their children' education, healthcare services, medical systems, etc relating to the healthy growing process of their children. As a result, these parents find a priority to spend a long time of their marital life working hard to lay a financially solid foundation before welcoming their children to real life. Another reason is that as there are increasingly usual to see many people who prefer working intensively to get a long run career path of their life than giving birth and spending time raising their children. Therefore, these people only are willing to give birth when they have already been satisfied with their job position and would like to feel the happiness of the peaceful atmosphere of their families.

On the other hand, this trend has driven many children's lives to be thriving. To be more specific, due to the budget that their parents had prepared for them, most of these children have more chances to get access to advanced educational environment at the early stage of their life. With more crucial practical courses such as English, Artist, Music, Sport that would facilitate the comprehensive development of children in term of physical and mental well being. As a result, these children find it easy to drive their lives to success than other children whose background family is not affluent enough. However, this trend simultaneously could threaten the health of both mothers and their offsprings. The more age mothers have, the harder it is to give birth. Seriously, this could cause the cases of immature birth or even barren of mothers.

In summary, I personally believe that the trend of giving birth later in the marital life of many parents in today's life could be seen as good preparation for their children's lives, but in some case, this could lead to regrets that could carry over every walks of parent's lives.