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People should follow the customs and traditions when people start to live in a new country. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Many people think, when they have a new life in the other country, people should chase the convention and the habit. I completely agree with this opinion.

When you live at the new country if you don’t change your tradition for accord with this country you will have many trouble in there. If you don’t adapt to the traditional in new country you uill be distance by inhabitant in this country and to be in difficulties. For axample, when you starts up a business, maybe you will have a problem in terms of you fall foul of the law. And when you different with all people in there, you will be isolated from other people.

On the other hand, if you blend into the convention you’ll have many benefits when you live in new country. Living at the new country, anything new, you will have knowledge about this country. One advantage is you will easily make a friend in this country. For instance, when you have problem in there, they will help you find out way to come up against problem.

All in all, people should adapt to the convention and the traditional when people live at the new country very important. It help newcomers get used to life in the new country and i argue that.