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Nguyenhieuhuflit92 Posted 14 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing
Please help me check these sentences (English).
Every year/annually in late autumn, leaves fall in abundance in streets. The sky abounds with clouds. I am enlivened by the gentle memories of back-to-school days.
It’s virtually impossible for me to forget those pleasant feelings coming over my mind like flower petals smiling under clear skies.
The feelings which have never been jotted down because I did not know what to write and now I can not recall them all.
Whenever I see kids shrinking against their moms on their first day to school, I feel exhilarated.
Thank you very much indeed!
It’s virtually impossible for me to forget those pleasant feelings coming over my mind like flower petals smiling under clear skies.
The feelings which have never been jotted down because I did not know what to write and now I can not recall them all.
Whenever I see kids shrinking against their moms on their first day to school, I feel exhilarated.
Thank you very much indeed!
Top answer
These sentences are basically correct, but rather ponderous in nature. Was it an exercise in using "big words"? " is not a complete sentence.
- These sentences are basically correct, but rather ponderous in nature.
- Was it an exercise in using "big words"?
- " is not a complete sentence.
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These sentences are basically correct, but rather ponderous in nature. Was it an exercise in using "big words"?
Exception: "The feelings....." is not a complete sentence.
Exception: "The feelings....." is not a complete sentence.
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Thank you very much! Yes, it was. Translation assignment. I translated it from Vietnamese.
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