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The table below shows social and economic indicators for four countries in 1994, according to United Nations statistics.The table gives information about the social and economic signal in four nations namely Canada, Japan, Peru, Zaire in the year 1994.It is clear from the graph that the indicators in Canada and Japan were all higher than those of Peru and Zaire. Additionally, Zaire had the lowest figures for all indicators. Japan and Canada had an annual income of $ 15,760 and $ 11,100 per person, respectively. These figures were overwhelmingly greater than the corresponding figures of $ 160 in Peru and $ 130 in Zaire.Healthy indicators, too, reflected the overall level of affluence in the four nations. Life expectancy at birth in the developing countries was higher than less developing nations. For example, Japan reported the highest life expectancy, which was 78. The figure for Canada was slightly lower, at 78.While the longevity of Peru’s and Zaire’ population were highest, at 51 and 47 respectively. A number of calories consumed daily per person roughly are the same ranking. Canada consumed some 3,326 calories per day, while Japanese people consumed 2,246 calories, The corresponding figures for Peru and Zaire were 1,927 and 1,749 respectively. Literacy rate among adults in Peru and Zaire were lower than Canada and Japan. These figures only accounted for 68% and 34%. While Canada and Japan had the similar rate, both nations reported literacy rates of 99%.

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The table gives information about ~~the~~ four social and economic indicators ~~signal~~ in four nations, namely Canada, Japan, Peru, and Zaire, in the year 1994. These indicators include annual income, life expectancy, caloric intake, and adult literacy. [This is your opening summary, so include all relevant categories you are going to talk about later.]

It is clear from the graph that the indicators in for Canada and Japan were all higher than those of Peru and Zaire. Additionally, Zaire had the lowest figures for all indicators.

Japan and Canada had an annual income of $15,760 and $11,100 per person, respectively. These figures were overwhelmingly greater than the corresponding figures of $160 in for Peru and $130 in for Zaire. [Put the dollar sign immediately before the number: $100 not $ 100. Also, break up the large paragraph into smaller paragraphs to make it easier to read.]

Healthy indicators, too, reflected the overall level of affluence in the four nations. Life expectancy at birth in the developed ~~ing~~ countries was higher than in the ~~less~~ developing nations. [Developing nations are moving out of poverty. Developed nations are more or less affluent.] For example, Japan reported the highest life expectancy, which was 78. The figure for Canada was slightly lower, at 76. On the other hand, ~~While~~ ["while" makes this a sentence fragment.] the longevity of Peru’s and Zaire’ populations were much worse ~~highest~~, at 51 and 47 respectively. [New paragraph.]

A The number of calories consumed daily per person roughly followed ~~are~~ the same ranking. Canada consumed some 3,326 calories per day, while Japanese people consumed 2,246 calories. , The corresponding figures for Peru and Zaire were 1,927 and 1,749 respectively.

Finally, [Indicate you are ending your remarks.] literacy rates among adults in Peru and Zaire were much lower than in Canada and Japan. Peru reported an adult literacy rate of ~~These figures only accounted for~~ 68% and Peru reported 34%, while Canada and Japan ~~had the similar rate,~~ both ~~nations~~ reported literacy rates of 99%.

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Please help me check the table graph. thank u very much

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