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Kk Posted 21 years ago
Grammar

Please, help me check sentences. Thank you.

Hello,
Can you give me a hand with thses sentences.
Help me check them.
I appreciate your help.

In contrast to knowledge gained form book, knowledge gained can equip learners with a space to soak up profound knowledge.

This is a cleft sentence.
It is after getting an opportunity of internship in media that I really understand what the news is and how I can be an outstanding journalist.

people live in an ever-changing world in which they don’t be able to predict what will happen

Knowledge from experiences is superior to that from books.
  

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In contrast to knowledge gained form book, knowledge gained can equip learners with a space to soak up profound knowledge. I believe the words “from experience” are missing here in this sentence, after the second occurrence of the word “knowledge”. Otherwise, it is unclear what exactly is contrasted to the knowledge gained from books.

  • In contrast to knowledge gained form book, knowledge gained can equip learners with a space to soak up profound knowledge.
  • I believe the words “from experience” are missing here in this sentence, after the second occurrence of the word “knowledge”.
  • Otherwise, it is unclear what exactly is contrasted to the knowledge gained from books.
  • Also I think it should be “from books” instead of “form book”.
  • people live in an ever-changing world in which they don’t be able to predict what will happen I think it should be “in which they are not able to predict…” rather than “don’t be able to…”.
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In contrast to knowledge gained form book, knowledge gained can equip learners with a space to soak up profound knowledge.
I believe the words “from experience” are missing here in this sentence, after the second occurrence of the word “knowledge”. Otherwise, it is unclear what exactly is contrasted to the knowledge gained from books. Also I think it should be “from books” instead of “form
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An Attempt has the right idea; here is my attempt:

'In contrast to knowledge gained from books, knowledge gained from experience can equip learners with [a space to soak up profound knowledge].'--Sorry, I don't understand this last phrase-- please recast it, KK.

'It is only after getting a media internship that I really understand what 'news' is and how I can become an o
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I need to know about this topic .... i mean how can i write this topic could you please give me the example about below topic ,

Compare and contrast knowledge gained from experience with knowledge gained from books. In your opinion, which source is more important? Why?
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0 What is wrong with this sentence: The compititions excitement had a major affect on the spectaters0-

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