Please help me check my writting about introducing myself when i apply any works.
Dear Sir/Madam,
My name is Linh. I’m 20 years old and at present I’m studying Portuguese in Hanoi University. Although I live in Ha Noi now, I come from Hung Yen where I have a small family: my father, my mother and my older sister. In my family, my mom is the closest person to me.
I’m a active and hard-working person. In work, I really enjoy working as a team and would like to be contact with people. I’m not extremely keen on numbers, that’s may be exactly the reason I love language. In my spare time, I’m interested in reading, writing, discovering all new things in the whole world or watching films or TV shows or even sometimes go out to shopping only if the weather allows me too. My strongest strait is attention to detail. Many people says that I’m a careful and meticulous person, in addition, also eager for learn and friendly.
I’m looking for a part-time job and I wonder if you and me are suitable. Languages is my hobby and I hope that this work help me improve not only my English skills but also my communication skills. I would be ready to start immediately.
I’m looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours faithfully,
Linh.
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Dear Sir/Madam, My name is Linh. I’m 20 years old and at present I’m studying Portuguese at Hanoi University. Although I live in Ha Noi now, I come from Hung Yen where I have a small family: my father, my mother and my older sister.
- Dear Sir/Madam, My name is Linh.
- I’m 20 years old and at present I’m studying Portuguese at Hanoi University.
- Although I live in Ha Noi now, I come from Hung Yen where I have a small family: my father, my mother and my older sister.
- In my family, my mom is the closest person to me.
- ) I’m an active and hard-working person.
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Dear Sir/Madam,
My name is Linh. I’m 20 years old and at present I’m studying Portuguese at Hanoi University. Although I live in Ha Noi now, I come from Hung Yen where I have a small family: my father, my mother and my older sister. In my family, my mom is the closest person to me. (That is not a professional thing to say when you are asking about a job.)
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