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The charts show the amount and quality of water supplied to two regions of the world.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

You should write at least 150 words.

The two bar charts compare Australia versus South East Asia in terms of the proportion of inhabitants receiving water and the level of cleanliness of water supply in two years 1990, 2010.

In general, a higher percentage of citizens in both regions received water supply in 2010 compared to 1990. However, in both years Australian population was supplied with cleaner water than those in South East Asia.

In detail, fourth-fifths of citizens in Australia had a water supply, which was twofold as much as South East Asia's population in 1990. After 20 years, the gap between them narrowed significantly, as nearly all people in Australia were supplied water while the percentage of South East Asia's reached the point where the former stood at in 1990. Regarding the quality of water, the water supply in Australia in 2010 had a purity level of 80% compared to above 60% in 1990. In contrast, the cleanliness level in South East Asia did not change much in two years, ranging 39% to 40%

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