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Some people think that children should start school at a very early age, but others believe that should not go to school until they are older. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

Some people think that children, should go to school at a very early age. Others, however, think shouldn't go to school until they are older. I would argue that starting school at a very early age has many benefits and going to school at a older age will have some drawbacks.

On the one hand, when children go to school at a older age, their study time will longer, their success will probably come when they are older and working time will be short, so young labor force will not be long maintained, the national economy may be able to decline, this will have negative consequences to our society.

On the other hand, it seems to me that the benefits of going to school at a very early age more considerable. Firstly, todays the healthcare system is very modern, so the health and life expectancy are improving, children's thinking is also from there is developed. Therefore, going to school at a very early age will shorten the study period, people will have degrees in young age. They will serve their country longer. Young workforce will have more time to accumulate more their hands-on experience. Secondly, going to school at this age, many children's talents will be discovered. For example, on television programs today, we also often see a lot of very young children have many special talents. Finally, children who start school at a very early age will be approached to education soon, so their thinking, morality and academic ability will be formed early. This will create a solid foundation for the nation's education system.

In conclusion, from something I mentioned above, we see that children should go to school at a very early age because of its benefits.