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Kk Posted 21 years ago
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Please help me check my sentences. Thank you

Hi 


I made some sentences, but I am not sure whether they are right or not.


If you find something wrong in Grammar or vocabulary, help me check them.


Thank you very much.


1.The process of game playing benefits people in term of body and mind.


2.Whether the outcome of a game pleased people or not, they had already achieved the purpose of reducing their relentless stress. 


3. It was pity that our rival defeated us, but we didn’t care about the result of the game


4.Giving encouragement is the best means by which to arouse our team’s morale.


5.Not only are winners pleasant but also loser enjoy the process of game playing. 
  
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Kk Hi I made some sentences, but I am not sure whether they are right or not. If you find something wrong in Grammar or vocabulary, help me check them. Thank you very much.
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  • If you find something wrong in Grammar or vocabulary, help me check them.
  • Thank you very much.
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KkHi 


I made some sentences, but I am not sure whether they are right or not.


If you find something wrong in Grammar or vocabulary, help me check them.


Thank you very much.


1.The process of game playing benefits people in term of body and mind.

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More possibilities.  Notice how the revised sentences are all shorter than the original.  

1.The process of game playing benefits people in term of body and mind.

   People benefit in body and mind from playing games.


2.Whether the outcome of a game ple
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