Please help me check my Ielts writing Task 1

The table below gives information on consumer spending on different items in five different countries in 2002.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.

My writing:

The table compares the percentage of customer spending on three main categories of items in five countries, namely Ireland, Italy, Spain, Sweden, Turkey in 2002.

As we can learn from the table, food/drink/tobacco were the most crucial category as they had the highest percentage of customer expenditure. In Turkey and Ireland, consumers spent 32.14% and 28.91% their income on these items, which made them the first and the second place of all 5 nations.

On the second category which is clothing/footwear, Ireland, Spain, Turkey had quite equivalent figure of percentage as they were 6.43%, 6,51%, 6.63%. Meanwhile, Italy was the country that had the highest expending percentage on fashion items (9%) and in contrast, that of Sweden were the lowest (5.40%).

Finally, leisure/education seemed to be the least important compared with other two sorts of items, the numbers only ranged from 1-4,5%. The percentage of spending on entertainment/education of Sweden and Italy were quite similar, while that of Turkey were a bit more (4.35%). People in Ireland spent the lowest on these type of items as they were 2.21%.

In conclusion, each of country had different percentage of national consumer spending in 2002. Turkey stayed the first position in all three kinds of ítems in comparison with the other four countries.