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The two pictorials outline how different the tendency of the overheavy and bulky mature-ages was among 51 years since 1965 in one country and also give information about the percentage which adults shared based on their weight in the last year of this time frame.
Obviously, we can see a climb to a significant majority during the period in the column graph, which means the weighty inhabitants spotted a wide range of the population in 2015.
As is presented in the bar chart, the later year, the more people who passed the weight limit. According to the figure, between the late 60s and the early 80s, the data leveled out at approximately a half. Moreover, the number of stouts shot up by around 20 percent two decades after. And by the year of 2015, this proportion accounted for the maximum value ,slightly over three quarters.
Categorically speaking that the obese and overweight occupied the most rate in the second presentation. As clear as crystal, this two-group of people constituted a quite familiar ratio of about a third. On the other hand, only a tiny portion of people become seriously fat. Meanwhile, there was five times as much in the number of hale and hearty populaces.
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