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• Requirement: The table below gives information about the problems faced by children in two primary schools in 2005 and 2015.

• My essay:

The given table compares the proportions of pupils in two primary schools experienced seven different educational problems in the years 2005 and 2015.

It is clear that school A had higher proportions of children with all seven educational difficulties in both years compared to school B. In 2015, school A managed to reduce the incidence of most of the problems, while school B saw an overall rise in the percentage of children who were struggling.

In 2005, 42% of pupils in school A found it difficult to follow instructions, which was the highest figure shown on the table, whereas only 6% of pupils in school B experienced this problem. Similarly, the propotion of children had problems in spelling, listening skills, verbal expression and concentration in lesson in school A ranged from 30% to 40% while the equivalent figures for school B stood at 5% to 15%.

In 2015, the differences in the percentage of children with educational difficulties in both schools were not significant. The proportion of students in school A who struggled to follow instructions fell by 24%. In school B, the proportion of pupils who struggled with spelling and following instructions in 2015 doubled that figures in 2005, 10% and 12% compared to 5% and 6% respectively. In both schools, the incidence of struggling reading and handwriting problems increased slightly throughout the period.