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Topic 1: A book you have read recentlyWell, one of my favorites is reading books so a book that impressed to me is “ The running dream”, yeah. This book was written by Wendelin and was published in 2011.The book tells about a girl who is Jessica, she is a good athlete but in an accident, she was broken her legs. Yeah. You know, in the first time, she was very disappointed and she thought she’d never run again. Then, she had to learn walking again, like a baby. After a long time, she could walk but also difficult. And you know, after that, she can run again and achieve her dream once more.Through this story, I fell more motivation and nothing is impossible. Yeah, I really love this book.Topic 2: Making friends strangerTo be honest, I think making friends stranger has advantages and disadvantages. Yeah you know, when making friends stranger I can have more a lot of friends but I don’t know their character, whether they are a good person or not so I think to be careful when making friends stranger, it can be very dangerous when I don’t know who they are.Well, nowadays, the technologies develop and I can make friends by social media such as Facebook, Instagram, and Twitter. Furthermore,  I can join a club or a class for making friends or sometimes through my friends.To be honest, I think appearance is not important to me in making friends stranger because I think the character is important more than appearance.

AlpheccaStars · Accepted Answer

Your request ( Please help me check my grammar) is incorrect. Consider these three sentences.

1) Please help me to carry my bags ( You carry the bags, but I assist you. )
 2) Please carry my bags. (I carry the bags for you. )
 3) Please help me by carrying my bags. (If I carry your bags, it will be good for you.)

1) Please help me check my grammar. (You check your grammar, but I assist. The web site does not allow this.)
2) Please check my grammar. ( I check your grammar and give you feedback. )
3) Please help me by checking my grammar. ( I check your grammar. That will help you.)

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AlpheccaStars · Answer

Well, one of my favorites (Do you mean "favorite activities"?) is reading books so a book that impressed to me is “ The running dream”~~, yeah~~. This book was written by Wendelin (

Which one?
Godefroy Wendelin (1580-1667), Flemish astronomer
Saint Wendelin of Trier (554-617), hermit and abbot
Wendelin Wiedeking (1952- ), a German businessman
Wendelin Weißheimer (1838-1910), German classical composer)

and was published in 2011.

The book tells about a girl, ~~who is~~ Jessica, (comma splice error) she is a good athlete but in an accident, (comma splice error) she was broken (wrong form) her legs. ~~Yeah~~. You know, (No, I don't know. This is an expression called "a filler" and it is practically useless in any writing.) ~~in the first time~~, At first, she was very disappointed and she thought she’d never run again. Then, she had to learn walking again, like a baby. After a long time, she could walk but also difficult. (comma splice error) And you know, after that, she can run again and achieve her dream once more.

Through this story, I fell more motivation and nothing is impossible. ~~Yeah~~, I really love this book.

Stella NgTopic 2: Making friends stranger

To be honest, I think making friends stranger (?? This makes no sense at all. It means that you cause your friends to become more weird that they already are. ) has advantages and disadvantages. Yeah you know, when making friends stranger I can have more a lot of friends but I don’t know their character, whether they are a good person or not so I think to be careful when making friends stranger, (??) (comma splice error) it can be very dangerous when I don’t know who they are.

Well, nowadays, the technologies develop and I can make friends by social media such as Facebook, Instagram, and Twitter. Furthermore, I can join a club or a class for making (wrong form) friends or sometimes through my friends.

To be honest, I think appearance is not important to me in making friends stranger because I think ~~the~~ character is important more than appearance.

Please help me check my grammar

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