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Some people say that economic growth is the only way to end hunger and poverty, while others say that economic growth is damaging the environment so it should be stopped. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Some people think that development is the only way to end hunger and poverty, while others argue that the growing economy is making the environment more polluting so it should be stopped. In my opinion, we need to simultaneously implement both the economic development and the environment protection, which will bring about better results.

In terms of economic development, it brings to us many benefits. First, indeed, economic development is the fastest way to end hunger in many countries. In fact, in developed countries, unemployment has been reduced to the maximum and jobs become more diversified, enabling people to find jobs quickly. Second, income of people is raised, other fields such as health, education, infrastructure are invested, then, the quality of life of human will be increasingly. It is sure that poverty and hunger will not be a problem anymore.

In terms of the impact on the environment of economic development, indeed, economic development will also cause environmental damage. However, if we handle waste in industry, argiculture, so on and raising awareness of human more, this will decrease even don't cause pollute to the environment. In factories need to be set up waste water treatment systems. Don't to toxic gas and waste water is dispersed. Moreover, human need to have mind protecting environment such as don't litter indiscriminately, using public bus instead of using motorbike or car.

In conclusion, growing economy and protecting environment are two essential actions which need to be done concurrently to developing sustainable economy. Then, people will get off hunger and poverty.