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My name Sofriesilero Zumaytis, now I live with sisters, nephew and my parents. I really love my family, because they were always there when I needed help and they always give me support in order to stay ahead. My parents were also very attentive and full of a sense of responsibility to their children. Although I feel my mother is instrumental in raising her children, because she is a housewife, and my father worked from morning to evening, so he has less time for their children on weekdays. Nevertheless, my father always took his time on the day of the week to play with the children when I was little or bring us to malls or other places. He also frequently gives advice and quite often check our exam’s score. He also often teaches me Math when I was in elementary .
The closest person to me in my family is my third sister, named Elva. although me and her had a considerable age difference, which is 9 years old, I still close with her, even though she was the one who most often noisy with me. She's like a friend, not just a sister therefore when I had a problem, the first person I asked her opinion is her. In my oppinion,she always gave wise solution, perhaps because she already has enough experience, otherwise it when giving advice or counsel tasty and smooth tone. But if I faced a big problem, I will ask the opinion from my mother because she already has a lot of experience. I think my mother is the person who most influenced my life. When I was little, my sisters is in high school and college, so they rarely are at home, therefore I became very close with my mom, because my mother did not work, she is a housewife. My mother often tells about her pastlife when I was little, and gave advise to me from these stories. The stories provide motivation for me to live in this life, especially when I faced a big problem, the story is very helpful to me, therefore I think my mother was the most influenced person in my life.
I feel lucky to have a sister and not be an only child. My sister often helped me in dealing with the problems that exist, and they are also much more mature than me,so I often ask for opinions from them. They also make my life became more colorful, they often play with me when I was a child even our age differ greatly, and they also provide a boost to me, even though we still used often noisy because of small problems, such as seizure of the TV remote or snacks. But the commotion that makes the house becomes more crowded. I am very happy if my sisters had gone home because before they come, I just with my mother in home.
When I was in elementary school, I often go for vocation with my family, we ever go to Pangandaran, Lampung, Semarang, Yogyakarta, Jakarta, Surabaya, Bali, Malang, Japan, Puncak, Sukabumi and Bromo. I was glad when spending holidays on vocation with family because I love traveling and a sense of togetherness is felt when for vocation together. The most happiest moment in my family is when go to Bromo. We went there as a family plus my grandmother, although it was tiring journey and stampedes because of a congenital stuff in the car, the trip very memorable for me. Although only to Bromo, but the trip was memorable, because the sense of togetherness is felt, especially when traveling in a car, was very strong sense of community.
From the first, my parents really wanted to go to Europe but there was always a hindrance, therefore if they spend all the money to go on vacation I would not forbid them, because it is their own money and they are already working hard to get the money. Besides my parents already old and my father had disease, so if they want to traveling I would agree.
If later I wanted to get married but my parents do not agree, then I will obey my parents, because the parents are usually more sensitive feelings, and they know the good and bad for their children. In addition, if forced to marry with that person, then the relationship will be in harmony again, because my parents did not approve of the person. People also might be talking about us, if my parents do not approve of our marriage, so it would be better if I obey my parents.