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MrForeverBlues Posted 10 years ago
Letter Writing

Please help me check and correct any weird expressions. This a game using four words to create a story, The given words may be used in the context or any related words may be used in place of the given words.

At an exquisite tailor shop, the owner’s son, who was in charge of Sales decided to take over his dad business and run it. Meanwhile, a stringent lass strolled into the tailor shop. Both of them had a warmth conversation as she tried to get a best deal for her tailored jacket. The lass’s great body figure and beautiful appearance had caught his eyes. He had a special tailoring machine at home so he beamingly took this opportunity to invite her over to his house to tailor a jacket for her. On one night, the lass stopped by his house and rang the bell. He welcomed the lass with great hospitality. At last, the lass tried on the newly tailored jacket. Due to the overwhelming love he had for her, they married each other and lived happily ever after. A zipper is just like love. When a zipper is tightly fastened, it will be difficult to separate it.
  

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At an exquisite tailor shop, the owner’s son, who was in charge of s ales decided to take over his da d's business and run it. Meanwhile, a stringent lass strolled into the tailor shop . Both of them and had a wa rm th conversation with the son as she tried to get a best good deal for her on a tailor -made ed jacket.

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  • At an exquisite tailor shop, the owner’s son, who was in charge of s ales decided to take over his da d's business and run it.
  • Meanwhile, a stringent lass strolled into the tailor shop .
  • Both of them and had a wa rm th conversation with the son as she tried to get a best good deal for her on a tailor -made ed jacket.
  • The lass’s great body figure and beautiful appearance had caught his eyes.
  • He had a special tailoring sewing machine at hom e, so he beamingly gladly took this opportunity to invite her over to his house to tailor the jacket for her.
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At an exquisite tailor shop, the owner’s son, who was in charge of sales decided to take over his dad's business and run it. Meanwhile, a stringent lass strolled into the tailor shop . Both of them and had a warm th conversation with the son as she tried to get a best good deal
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Stringent: I want to say a stingy girl, but I want another vocabulary for it.Can u recommend any to me?
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I found a word penny-pinching. Thank for your help.
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May I know your email please?
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The repeated use of "lass" is unnatural.

Try "young woman" the first time and just "woman" the others. Or "the lass" in one of the later uses.
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Thanks. May I know your email please?
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I don't know of any of us who provide private correction.

I don't provide my email here. Sorry.
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