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Adonis Posted 21 years ago
Grammar
Please, help me chech these sentences, Thank you
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Can you help me check these sentences.
I don't know how to revise them.
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In contrast to television, listeners can not communicate and interact with them.
Attending a live play makes it possible for spectators to enjoy a sense of immediacy, and thus cheer the athletes.
A sense of immediacy is the biggest incentive to attract and mobilize people to attend a live sport. Because it enables spectators to be excited, we are integrated with a play
I think a live performance can contribute to communication and interaction with performers and a sense of immediacy.
Can you help me check these sentences.
I don't know how to revise them.
I appreciate your help.
In contrast to television, listeners can not communicate and interact with them.
Attending a live play makes it possible for spectators to enjoy a sense of immediacy, and thus cheer the athletes.
A sense of immediacy is the biggest incentive to attract and mobilize people to attend a live sport. Because it enables spectators to be excited, we are integrated with a play
I think a live performance can contribute to communication and interaction with performers and a sense of immediacy.
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In contrast to television, listeners can not communicate or interact with them. ] Attending a live play makes it possible for spectators to enjoy a sense of immediacy, and thus cheer the athletes. ] I think a live performance can contribute to a sense of immediacy with performers.
- In contrast to television, listeners can not communicate or interact with them.
- ] Attending a live play makes it possible for spectators to enjoy a sense of immediacy, and thus cheer the athletes.
- ] I think a live performance can contribute to a sense of immediacy with performers.
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In contrast to television, listeners can not communicate or interact with them. [WHAT'S 'THEM'?]
Attending a live play makes it possible for spectators to enjoy a sense of immediacy, and thus cheer the athletes. [THERE ARE NO ATHLETES IN A PLAY (DRAMA)]
A sense of immediacy is the biggest incentive for people to attend a live sport, because it excites spectators, they are integ
Attending a live play makes it possible for spectators to enjoy a sense of immediacy, and thus cheer the athletes. [THERE ARE NO ATHLETES IN A PLAY (DRAMA)]
A sense of immediacy is the biggest incentive for people to attend a live sport, because it excites spectators, they are integ
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Hello Mister Micawber
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I revise my sentences.
Can you help me check again Thank you.
In contrast to television, listeners can not communicate and interact with performers.
Attending a live sport or activity makes it possible for spectators to enjoy a sense of immediacy, and thus cheer the athletes.
There are variety of t
Thank you for your help.
I revise my sentences.
Can you help me check again Thank you.
In contrast to television, listeners can not communicate and interact with performers.
Attending a live sport or activity makes it possible for spectators to enjoy a sense of immediacy, and thus cheer the athletes.
There are variety of t
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In contrast to television, listeners can communicate and interact with performers. [IT SEEMS YOU HAD THE IDEA REVERSED. WITH TV WE CAN'T COMMUNICATE, WHILE IN THE STADIUM WE CAN, RIGHT?]
Attending a live sport or other activity makes it possible for spectators to cheer the athletes and enjoy a sense of immediacy.
There are a variety of ways to maintain (our) health.
Attending a live sport or other activity makes it possible for spectators to cheer the athletes and enjoy a sense of immediacy.
There are a variety of ways to maintain (our) health.
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I mean that we also can perceive performers'sentiment easily and thus interact with them by clap and our eyes. In contrast to television, listeners can not communicate and interact with them. ( I am not sure how to use In contrast to.
This statement that the advent of television contributes to a extremely negative effect on relationsh
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I mean that we also can perceive performers'sentiment easily and thus interact with them by clap and our eyes. In contrast to television, listeners can not communicate and interact with them. ( I am not sure how to use In contrast to.
This statement that the advent of television contributes to a extremely negative effect on relationsh
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Still not clear to me, Adonis, sorry-- 'not' reverses any opinion or statement. Of the sentences that I rewrote:
'In contrast to television, listeners can communicate and interact with performers.'-- This sentence means that with TV you cannot interact, but at the stadium you can interact.
'The statement that television has an extremely negative effect on relationships among p
'In contrast to television, listeners can communicate and interact with performers.'-- This sentence means that with TV you cannot interact, but at the stadium you can interact.
'The statement that television has an extremely negative effect on relationships among p
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Hello Mister Micawber
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The topic is that Attending a live performance (for example, a play, concert, or sporting events) is more enjoyable watching the same event on television.
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We also can perceive performers’ sentiment easily and thus interact with them by clap and our eyes. In contrast to television, listeners can not communicate and interact wit
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The topic is that Attending a live performance (for example, a play, concert, or sporting events) is more enjoyable watching the same event on television.
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We also can perceive performers’ sentiment easily and thus interact with them by clap and our eyes. In contrast to television, listeners can not communicate and interact wit
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OK, Adonis-- the following sentences are correct and correctly express your ideas, please read them carefully so that you understand how to use 'not' and 'in contrast':
'Attending a live performance (for example, a play, concert, or sporting event) is more enjoyable than watching the same event on television.'
'At a live event, we can perceive performers’ sentiments e
'Attending a live performance (for example, a play, concert, or sporting event) is more enjoyable than watching the same event on television.'
'At a live event, we can perceive performers’ sentiments e
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