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topic: What will a typical day be like in 2050 ?

my essay:

Society grows and changes more and more, especially science and technology. Sometimes, I wonder what a typical day in 2050 will be like, how the world will change and so on. Then, I find the way to have the answer and speculations about them for myself. Maybe, the life in 2050 will have a big difference in comparison with present.

In 2050, there is not a simple aspect of my life not transformed my technology

Firstly,. Today I got up early to get ready for work. I don’t need an alarm clock anymore because the new biometric chip I had installed in my body sends signals to my brain to gently wake me up. Besides, the transportation will be changed. Parents don’t need drive their son to school and drive to work every day. Instead there will be automatic transports help them and students can take lessons by Internet at home and don't have to go to school every day and take a lot of textbooks.

Secondly, through technology, I don’t have to busy with cooking and cleaning after stress work every day. Instead, you will cook and clean through appliances which remote controlled by smart phone.

Lastly, In 2050, People will be friends with robots. Robots will appear everywhere such as in office, street, home and so on. People have to work in the connection to them in all aspects. That is very similar to real human. Not only its visual but also voice. Moreover, human can share their feeling, stories to them. And robot will even take care of children and elderly.

In conclusion, there will be a lot of changes in the next 32 years. My predictions maybe not right completely. Whether it a better or worse life depends on what we will do to it and how they can influence our life.