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Jiangyueming Posted 14 years ago
Grammar

Please help me by correcting these sentences! Thank you!

Not all of people can afford fashionable clothes. For some indigent people who are worry about having enough food every day, how can expect them to purchase fashionable clothes. The average price of fashionable clothes is 200 RMB. With this money, they can appease their hunger for a few days. What’s more, not everyone likes fashionable clothes. For me, I prefer formal clothes, because formal clothes are required for work and I have to wear it everyday. If I wear other fashionable clothes, it will be weird for me.
  

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The phrases in bold need some work! Not all of people can afford fashionable clothes. For some indigent people who are worry about having enough food every day, how can expect them to purchase fashionable clothes.

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  • The phrases in bold need some work!
  • Not all of people can afford fashionable clothes.
  • For some indigent people who are worry about having enough food every day, how can expect them to purchase fashionable clothes.
  • The average price of fashionable clothes is 200 RMB.
  • With this money, they can appease their hunger for a few days.
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The phrases in bold need some work!

Not all of people can afford fashionable clothes.

For some indigent people who are worry about having enough food every day,

how can expect them to purchase fashionable clothes.
The average price of fashionable clothes is 200 RMB. With this money, they can appease their hunger for a few days. What’s more, not e
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Thank you. Here is my revision:
Not all people can afford fashionable clothes.

For some indigent people who are worrying about having enough food every day,

how can you expect them to purchase fashionable clothes.
The average price of fashionable clothes is 200 RMB. With this money, they can appease their hunger for a few days. What’s more, not everyone likes fashionable
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That's really good! Emotion: yes

Let's just look at the last two lines above:
You had just written, ".
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