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Jiangyueming Posted 14 years ago
Grammar

Please help me by correcting these sentences. Thank you

Two months ago, I went for my first interview. But I didn’t perform well. I was afraid I wouldn't get this job, so at that night I decided to write a letter to HR department to explain that I was too tense and hoped they would give me one more chance. You know what? They invited me to participate the next round interview.
  

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You don't seem to be learning from my teaching. Two months ago, I went for my first inte rview. Bu t I didn’t perform well.

— Mister Micawber

  • You don't seem to be learning from my teaching.
  • Two months ago, I went for my first inte rview.
  • Bu t I didn’t perform well.
  • I was afraid I wouldn't get this job, so at that night I decided to write a letter to HR department to explain that I was too tense and hoped they would give me one more chance.
  • You know what?
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You don't seem to be learning from my teaching.

Two months ago, I went for my first interview. But I didn’t perform well. I was afraid I wouldn't get this job, so at that night I decided to write a letter to HR department to explain that I was too tense and hoped they would give me one more chance. You know what? They invited me to participate the
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Thank you. Is it wrong to put a comma before the world "but"?
Two months ago, I went for my first interview, but I didn’t perform well. I was afraid I wouldn't get this job, so that night I decided to write a letter to the HR department to explain that I was too tense and hoped they would give me one more chance. You know what? They invited me to participate in the next round interview.
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The comma is absolutely correct, and so is your revised text.
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