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Thread: Some people believe that studying at university or college is the best route to a successful career, while others believe that it is better to get a job straight after school. Discuss both views.

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Many student have some difficulties to choosing the continuous step in their life, between going on studying at university or having a job after they graduate high school. Both of ways have partially true.

There are variety of advantages when students have a job after school. First, they can earn money by themself. Therefore, they have ability of independent finance and they also help there parent. Second, they can learn many practical things from their living. The earlier they get a job, the more experiences they gain. In addition, they can also learn myriad special skills that university cannot teach. Third, they can have many opportunities in their job promotion. They can settle down earlier, afford a house and have a family.

Becoming a student at university also bring students many benefits. Academy is not only route to have a successful career, but it is a safe way in oder to have a good job. In modern life, many companies require academic qualifications from candidates. The better the qualifications are, the better the job is. Moreover, the rate of unemployment is getting more and more high. Therefore, the job market is very competitive. If you have excellent qualifications, your opportunity to have a good job will be higher. Besides, university teaches students various knowledge and skills. These knowledge is basic to help student to become a good employee or employer.

The two opinions are true, but for each person, the rate of true is different. It depends on each person.