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OBJECTIVE

Short-term Objective

- Graduating from a University with flying colors in Marketing. Working as an intern/part-time employee to gain work experience as improving soft skills.

- Improve my English to score above 7.0 on the IELTS to work at a global corporation.

Long-term Objective:

- Becoming an expert in the Marketing industry, especially brand management. Using knowledge, experience, and creativity to increase the brand value of the company.

- Sharing my knowledge and experience in Marketing with other people.

EDUCATION

UNIVERSITY OF FINANCE & MARKETING

August 2018 - Present

- Final-year student majoring in Integrated Marketing Communications.

- GPA: 3.52/4

EXPERIENCE

JACKMA ENGLISH HOMESTAY

February 2021 - Present

Marketing Intern | Part-time

Responsibilities included:

- Online Marketing: Planning and producing media publications in media channels: Social Media (Facebook, Tik Tok...) and Website (building a new website).

- Branding: Rebranding, build a new brand identity. Conducting the marketing activities to increase brand awareness.

ZERO MEDIA (SOCIAL MEDIA AGENCY)

September 2020 - January 2021

Planner | Part-time

Responsibilities included:

- Researching: analyze and evaluate the business of clients as well as their business environment to find insight for communication activities on Social Media.

- Planning: carry out the communication plan, follow and make the monthly reports for the client.

- Managing: manage the creative team, including designers and copywriters (assigning jobs, monitoring and evaluating their works)

CAT GARDEN (MINITREE STORE)

June 2020 – October 2020

Owner and Founder

I opened an online store to sell mini plants (that I plant and decorate by myself). I do communication activities and find a way to have a profit.

PDCA Ltd.

Event Organizer Collaborator | Part-time

Marketing Collaborator | Part-time

December 2019 – June 2020

Responsibilities included:

- Planning and producing content for media channels such as Facebook, Email, Website. Supporting the production of a number of media publications.

- Branding: Building the Brand Identity Guideline.

October 2018 – July 2020

Responsibilities included:

- Guiding and supporting students in training courses.

- Preparing documents for students in training courses.

ACTIVITIES & AWARD

- Content team member of the University’s Event Club (planning and executing events for students at university.)

- Scientific Research (Marketing Industry): team leader, researching about the perceived value of Gen Z in HCMC about local brands in the footwear industry (in process).

- Volunteer activities: Spring Volunteer, voluntary blood donation…

- Top 15 at Hanwha Content Creator Camp.

SKILLs

Office: Advanced

Design: Intermediate

- Use quite well Adobe Photoshop, Adobe Illustrator, Adobe Premiere.

Teamwork: Good.

Sociable, well-connected with other members.

Time management: Good at planning and managing time. Always on time.

Leadership: