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Anonymous Posted 10 years ago
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Please help me answer these two questions.

1. What's wrong with this sentence?

With Windows 7 Home Premium preinstalled, you can dive right in and enjoy working on a familiar platform.

2. What's wrong with this sentence?

Shoot quality videos with the fast-performing, HD capability of this PNY Technologies microSD card.

Thank you so much for your help!
  

Top answer

They both look OK to me. CJ

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  • They both look OK to me.
  • CJ
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They both look OK to me.

CJ
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Both sentences are understandable, but a little hard to understand at a first reading, which might indicate something that's off.

The problem with 1 seems to be a syntactical mismatch between the two halves of the sentence. "With...preinstalled" doesn't match "dive right in and enjoy working." It might be better simply as:

"Windows 7 Home Premium lets you dive right in and e
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AnonymousThe problem with 1 seems to be a syntactical mismatch between the two halves of the sentence.
There is nothing wrong with the syntax.

With Windows 7 Home Premium preinstalled, you can dive right in.
With Windows 7 Home Premium preinstalled, you can enjoy working on a familiar platform.

The modal "can" has two main verbs joined
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