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topic: Some people believe that living in big cities is becoming difficult. Others believe that it is getting easier. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

It is true that living in big cities has become one of the highly controversial issue that attract people's attetion in today's world. While it can be argued that it is really easy to live in big cities there are some people who strongly advocate that it is becoming hard. In my opinion, I totally agree with the former point of view. This eassay will discuss both sides of the debate.

On the one hand, there are some arguments in favor of the idea that living in the big cities bring numerous advantages to residents. Firstly, big cities make contributions to citizens with high level of benefit. It is winessed by big cities create greater employment possibilities and a higher standard of living. Secondly, living in big cities means approach high technology and infrastructure. Some advances, for example: companies, skyscrapers, internet offer much convenience. For example, if some one live in big city, he or she will get every kind of services immediately. This is a good benifit compared to life in countryside.

On the other hand, there are several reasons to support the statement that living in big cities will lead to some big problems. One main argument is that health condition. It is really difficult to adapt to climate change. With airborne pollutants, the cities appear a lot of dangerous disease such as lung cancer,bronchitis. Another issue is that in big cities, there are some incredible pressure of keeping pace with the development of modern life such as seeking a job, enhancing the level of job performance, pursuring higher education and being mature enough to live independently.

In conclusion, the above mentioned facts have created a dilemma when people evaluate the impact of this issu and it has still sparked controvery in recent years. As far as I am concerned, I put more emphasis on the idea that living in big cities is becoming easier. People should have further consideration on this issue

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It is true that living in big cities has become one of the highly controversial issue (It is an overstatement that his is a "highly controversial" issue. A highly controversial issue is "Should North Korea be allowed to develop nuclear bombs?") that attract people's attetion in today's world. While it can be argued that it is really easy to live in big cities there are some people who strongly advocate that it is becoming hard. In my opinion, I totally agree with the former point of view. This eassay will discuss both sides of the debate.

On the one hand, there are some arguments in favor of the idea that living in the big cities bring numerous advantages to residents. First, big cities make contributions to citizens with high level of benefit. It is winessed by big cities create greater employment possibilities and a higher standard of living. Second, living in big cities means approach high technology and infrastructure. Some advances, for example: companies, skyscrapers, (missing word) internet (missing punctuation) offer much convenience. For example, if some one live in big city, he or she will get every kind of services immediately. This is a good benifit compared to life in (missing word) countryside.

On the other hand, there are several reasons to support the statement that living in big cities will lead to some big problems. One main argument is that health condition. It is really difficult to adapt to climate change (No, climate change is a global, not local phenomenon.) . With airborne pollutants, the cities appear a lot of dangerous disease such as lung cancer,bronchitis. Another issue is that in big cities, there are some incredible pressure of keeping pace with the development of modern life such as seeking a job, enhancing the level of job performance, pursuring higher education and being mature enough to live independently.

In conclusion, the above mentioned facts have created a dilemma when people evaluate the impact of this issu and it has still sparked controvery in recent years. As far as I am concerned, I put more emphasis on the idea that living in big cities is becoming easier. People should have further consideration on this issue

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