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Arif Orçun Şeker Posted 9 years ago
Letter Writing
PLEASE HELP ME
Could you please check my letter below and advise if it sounds natural and if it is grammatically correct?
Thank you
"Dear Partners,
We would like to share some news from XXX COMPANY, while we are very close to the end of 2016.
We have increased our overall sales by 30 % in 2016 year.
We keep investing on our production capacity in parallel with increase of our sales.
We are happy to inform you that, our new production line will be actively running by June 2017.
Our production capacity will be reach to 5 million units / annually and it will be giving us flexibility for shorter lead times than sector average.
Meantime, there were a period during 2016, which effected lenght of our regular delivery times due to unforesen reasons.
Please accept our sincere apologizes, if that period caused any problem for your business.
Thank you for your partnership and continuous support."
Thank you
"Dear Partners,
We would like to share some news from XXX COMPANY, while we are very close to the end of 2016.
We have increased our overall sales by 30 % in 2016 year.
We keep investing on our production capacity in parallel with increase of our sales.
We are happy to inform you that, our new production line will be actively running by June 2017.
Our production capacity will be reach to 5 million units / annually and it will be giving us flexibility for shorter lead times than sector average.
Meantime, there were a period during 2016, which effected lenght of our regular delivery times due to unforesen reasons.
Please accept our sincere apologizes, if that period caused any problem for your business.
Thank you for your partnership and continuous support."
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Dear Mr McCarthy, Partners, It's the end of 2016, and w e would like to take this opportunity to share some of our news with you. from *** COMPANY, while we are very close to the end of 2016. We have increased our overall sales by 30 % in 201 6, year.
- Dear Mr McCarthy, Partners, It's the end of 2016, and w e would like to take this opportunity to share some of our news with you.
- from *** COMPANY, while we are very close to the end of 2016.
- We have increased our overall sales by 30 % in 201 6, year.
- and we keep investing on are continuing to invest in our production capacity in parallel with our increas ing of our sales.
- We are happy to inform you th at o ur new production line will be actively running by June 2017.
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Dear Mr McCarthy, Partners,
It's the end of 2016, and we would like to take this opportunity to share some of our news with you.from *** COMPANY, while we are very close to the end of 2016.
We have increased our overall sales by 30 % in 2016,year. and we keep investing on are continuing to
It's the end of 2016, and we would like to take this opportunity to share some of our news with you.
We have increased our overall sales by 30 % in 2016,
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teechrYes, thank you vsuresh. I'll fix it.You are very kind. Thank you,teechr.
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vsureshYou are very kind. Thank you, teechr.Thank you too, vsuresh. I believe in karma.
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