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Ansumaj Posted 12 years ago
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Dear all, Please correct this if there have any errors.
Write a letter to the principal asking for a week’s leave, stating the reason.
Respected Madam,
This is to inform you that I shall not be able to attend school from the 30th Jan to 7th Feb on account of my brother’s marriage ceremony.
Since my whole family is travelling to Delhi, I shall also be going with them. It will take us a week to get the marriage solemnized and to return to Kolkata. I shall be extremely greatful if you could grant me leave of absence for a week from 30th Jan to 7th Feb and oblige. An invitation card is attached with this application for your reference.
Thank you
Yours obediently,
Neelam
Write a letter to the principal asking for a week’s leave, stating the reason.
Respected Madam,
This is to inform you that I shall not be able to attend school from the 30th Jan to 7th Feb on account of my brother’s marriage ceremony.
Since my whole family is travelling to Delhi, I shall also be going with them. It will take us a week to get the marriage solemnized and to return to Kolkata. I shall be extremely greatful if you could grant me leave of absence for a week from 30th Jan to 7th Feb and oblige. An invitation card is attached with this application for your reference.
Thank you
Yours obediently,
Neelam
Top answer
Hi ansumaj I think it is always better to keep formal letters brief and to the point. If you think the details you have added are important you can do so. Respected Madam, I would like to inform you that I will not be able to attend school from the 30th Jan to 7th Feb as I am going to attend my brother's wedding.
- Hi ansumaj I think it is always better to keep formal letters brief and to the point.
- If you think the details you have added are important you can do so.
- Respected Madam, I would like to inform you that I will not be able to attend school from the 30th Jan to 7th Feb as I am going to attend my brother's wedding.
- I will be extremely grateful if you could grant me leave for the dates mentioned here.
- An invitation card is attached with this application for your reference.
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Hi ansumaj
I think it is always better to keep formal letters brief and to the point. If you think the details you have added are important you can do so.
Respected Madam,
I would like to inform you that I will not be able to attend school from the 30th Jan to 7th Feb as I am going to attend my brother's wedding.
I will be extremely gratefu
I think it is always better to keep formal letters brief and to the point. If you think the details you have added are important you can do so.
Respected Madam,
I would like to inform you that I will not be able to attend school from the 30th Jan to 7th Feb as I am going to attend my brother's wedding.
I will be extremely gratefu
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