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Anonymous Posted 15 years ago
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could you please tell me if this sentence is correct? "While working at the restaurant I managed to increase its revenue to 21% for the first month. This was the highest income the restaurant had for the last six years" thank you!
  

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Hi, could you please tell me if this sentence is correct? "While working at the restaurant , I managed to increase its revenue to 21% for the first month. This was the highest income the restaurant had for the last six years" I t's not wrong in grammar, but a number of things are unclear.

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  • Hi, could you please tell me if this sentence is correct?
  • "While working at the restaurant , I managed to increase its revenue to 21% for the first month.
  • This was the highest income the restaurant had for the last six years" I t's not wrong in grammar, but a number of things are unclear.
  • I suggest In my first month at the restaurant, I managed to increse its revenue by 21% over the previous month.
  • This was the highest monthly income for the previous six years.
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Hi,

could you please tell me if this sentence is correct? "While working at the restaurant, I managed to increase its revenue to 21% for the first month. This was the highest income the restaurant had for the last six years"

It's not wrong in grammar, but a number of things
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