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Vahidpnr Posted 16 years ago
Letter Writing
Please help me
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I have composed a mail as shown below. Please read and do necesary correction and modification.I will appreciate you , if you add proper conclusion at the end of the mail.
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vebby
Dear <zzzz>
My name is xxxx. I hope u have better understandability on me in one way or other. Anyway I will give you brief intro about myself. AM working as Softaware engineer in xyz ltd.
I know your elder daughter YYYY and it's been almost 3 year since I met her. I used to call her and I have good relationship with her. Slowly we started to love each other, that no one can separate us.
Recently I heard from YYYY that you have put some restriction on her. You forced her to stop calling me and taken back her mobile phone. Now she suffers like complete house arrest. I think you are worrying about something. As she told me that she loves her parents more than me and she doesn't want to make them cry. And also she told me that she don't want to marry me, if her parents are not interested
Since her public exam is near and it will affect her studies, it's not fair to behave like in this manner. As am educated and well settled, I would like to marry her. I don't want to make this happen in overnight. You can take your own time and am ready to wait for that.
<<< please help me to conclude the mail>>
I have composed a mail as shown below. Please read and do necesary correction and modification.I will appreciate you , if you add proper conclusion at the end of the mail.
Thanks
vebby
Dear <zzzz>
My name is xxxx. I hope u have better understandability on me in one way or other. Anyway I will give you brief intro about myself. AM working as Softaware engineer in xyz ltd.
I know your elder daughter YYYY and it's been almost 3 year since I met her. I used to call her and I have good relationship with her. Slowly we started to love each other, that no one can separate us.
Recently I heard from YYYY that you have put some restriction on her. You forced her to stop calling me and taken back her mobile phone. Now she suffers like complete house arrest. I think you are worrying about something. As she told me that she loves her parents more than me and she doesn't want to make them cry. And also she told me that she don't want to marry me, if her parents are not interested
Since her public exam is near and it will affect her studies, it's not fair to behave like in this manner. As am educated and well settled, I would like to marry her. I don't want to make this happen in overnight. You can take your own time and am ready to wait for that.
<<< please help me to conclude the mail>>
Top answer
Okay, I am going to try to correctly express what I think your message is. If I have changed the meaning of anything or left anything out, let me know. Dear <zzzz> My name is xx.
- Okay, I am going to try to correctly express what I think your message is.
- If I have changed the meaning of anything or left anything out, let me know.
- Dear <zzzz> My name is xx.
- I am writing in hopes that I can give you a better understanding of me.
- Let me begin by giving you brief introduction about myself.
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Okay, I am going to try to correctly express what I think your message is. If I have changed the meaning of anything or left anything out, let me know.
Dear <zzzz>
My name is xx. I am writing in hopes that I can give you a better understanding of me. Let me begin by giving you brief introduction about myself. Right now, I am working as software engineer in xyz l
Dear <zzzz>
My name is xx. I am writing in hopes that I can give you a better understanding of me. Let me begin by giving you brief introduction about myself. Right now, I am working as software engineer in xyz l
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Thanks Dr.D,
Im going to impress her father.. Wish me luck..
Regards
Im going to impress her father.. Wish me luck..
Regards
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