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B.J Posted 16 years ago
Letter Writing
Please help me.
Hi,
I wrote conversation witting. I don't know if it is natural. so someone please correct it.
M came out of the bath and are talkig to his son
M: I felt refresh. Jack, take the bath right now. Today is very cold. Water will get cool soon.
J: Ok, but after finish this, maybe 10 minutes.
M: No, stop doing it.
J: Father take bath first! The fun is about to start. Don't bother me
M: That's fine. Suit yourself.
Thanks a lot!
I wrote conversation witting. I don't know if it is natural. so someone please correct it.
M came out of the bath and are talkig to his son
M: I felt refresh. Jack, take the bath right now. Today is very cold. Water will get cool soon.
J: Ok, but after finish this, maybe 10 minutes.
M: No, stop doing it.
J: Father take bath first! The fun is about to start. Don't bother me
M: That's fine. Suit yourself.
Thanks a lot!
Top answer
J, I hesitate to attempt a correction without understanding the sequence of events. Is the father taking two baths?? The father comes out of the bath refreshed - the bathroom or the bathtub?
- J, I hesitate to attempt a correction without understanding the sequence of events.
- Is the father taking two baths??
- The father comes out of the bath refreshed - the bathroom or the bathtub?
- Anyway, it sounds like he just took a bath.
- So he wants his son to take a bath in the same water before it gets cold?
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Hi, B.J,
I hesitate to attempt a correction without understanding the sequence of events. Is the father taking two baths??
The father comes out of the bath refreshed - the bathroom or the bathtub?
Anyway, it sounds like he just took a bath. So he wants his son to take a bath in the same water before it gets cold?
I hesitate to attempt a correction without understanding the sequence of events. Is the father taking two baths??
The father comes out of the bath refreshed - the bathroom or the bathtub?
Anyway, it sounds like he just took a bath. So he wants his son to take a bath in the same water before it gets cold?
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Hi, Avangi
thanks for your help and sorry to confuse you.
In this dialogue, M means mother. So there appeared three person in it.
Mother took the bath first, and who do next.
In this context, which are not natural in my writting?
thanks for your help and sorry to confuse you.
In this dialogue, M means mother. So there appeared three person in it.
Mother took the bath first, and who do next.
In this context, which are not natural in my writting?
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Mother comes out of the bath, and is speaking to her son.
M: I feel refreshed, Jack. You should take a bath right now. It's very cold today, and the water will soon cool off.
J: Okay, but give me ten minutes. I want to finish what I'm doing.
M: No, right now!
J: Let Father go first. This is too much fun. It's just getting interesting. Quit botheri
M: I feel refreshed, Jack. You should take a bath right now. It's very cold today, and the water will soon cool off.
J: Okay, but give me ten minutes. I want to finish what I'm doing.
M: No, right now!
J: Let Father go first. This is too much fun. It's just getting interesting. Quit botheri
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