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Creativeguru Posted 18 years ago
Grammar

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0Exclusively only for you, the limited edition of XXX Mickey Mouse Diamond Pendant, only 88 pieces manufactured worldwide.00 Grab this exceptional piece of craftsmanship before someone else owns it.00 00Come and seize the opportunity be an owner of a marvelous creation that will be the envy of all. 02br
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00 Kinldy help me to write it in more sophisticated language, specially line - 00Grab this exceptional piece of craftsmanship before someone else owns it.0-
  

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0I've heard of " X waits for nobody". 0-

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0I've heard of " X waits for nobody". Will that do the trick?02br
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00**** girl: This **** body waits for nobody!0-
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0thats true but it does not fit here can you suggest anything new0-
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0I just re wrote it please correct the following:02br
00Exclusively only for you, the limited edition of Mickey Mouse Diamond Pendant, only 88 pieces manufactured worldwide.00 Grab this exceptional piece before someone else owns it.00 00Come and seize the opportunity 00be an owner of a marvelous creation that will be the envy of all. 00 0-
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1b00Exclusively for you02b00,02br
01b00the opportunity 02b01span01b00of being 02b00an owner of02span02br
01span00before someone else 01b00gets/buys02b00 it02span0-
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