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The , Geography and Climate

The UK which includes England, Scotland, Wales and Northern Ireland lies on two isles called with a total area of about 122000 square miles. These islands are washed by the Atlantic Ocean, Irish Sea, North Sea and English Channel which joining the Atlantic Ocean to the North Sea.

There are no high mountains in . Highland contains the principal mountain ranges which occupy most of the north and west of the country. Lowland , almost entirely composed of low rolling hills and meadows, lies to the southeast.

The British Isles have many rivers such as Thames, Clyde, and … Many of them are joined by canals so that it’s possible to use them as means of communication.

As for the forests they’re small and rare. The most famous of these is the .

Because of the Gulf Stream influence the climate of the is generally mild without the high temperature drop. It differs markedly from the one in the and regions which lie in the same latitude. Rainfalls are distributed evenly throughout the year. The winter isn’t cold that’s why rivers don’t freeze and snow never lies on the ground for long. The mild and damp climate in the makes favourable conditions for agriculture, especially for vegetable-farming, sheep- and cattle-farming.



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Highlighted somethings for you to fix. Anonymous Please, help me to check my essay : The United Kingdom, Geography and Climate The UK (spell it out) which includes England, Scotland, Wales and Northern Ireland . (New sentence) ___ ______ (__ - where you need to rephrase) British Isles with a total area of about 122,000 square miles.

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  • Anonymous Please, help me to check my essay : The United Kingdom, Geography and Climate The UK (spell it out) which includes England, Scotland, Wales and Northern Ireland .
  • (New sentence) ___ ______ (__ - where you need to rephrase) British Isles with a total area of about 122,000 square miles.
  • These islands are washed by the Atlantic Ocean, Irish Sea, North Sea and English Channel which joining the Atlantic Ocean to the North Sea.
  • There are no high mountains in British Isles.
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The United Kingdom, Geography and Climate
The UK (spell it out) which includes England, Scotland, Wales and Northern Ireland. (New sentence) ___ ______ (__ - where you need to rephrase) British Isles wi

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