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My Grandmother………………….
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> > I walked around into my grandmother wooden house looking around for her. It was a big but very poor old house. Termites are almost in each of the pylon of my grandmother’s wooden house eating them slowly, but the house, it’s still as it was. I don’t understand why she refuses to stay with me and my family as we have better and comfortable place to stay.
Finally, I found her at the kitchen sitting alone on the floor with her both leg stretching towards. She was doing something that I’m not sure what it is. I can see her beautiful long grey hair blow by the wind. I moved closer to her as she didn’t realize I was there. When she saw me, she gave me a big smile. I giggled as I saw she smile without her teeth, very funny. I went to her and gave her a big hug. I looked at her very closely, although she has so many wrinkles, she is still beautiful and I meant it. Actually her eyeball was black before but then this time when I saw her, she had a weird green, blue and grey mixture color of her eyeball. May be despite of her age, changes like this happened, I guess.
After sitting there a while and have a chat with her, I excused my self to go home and told her that I can’t wait to see her again next week.
chemas-microsoft-com:office:office" />> >
> > I walked around into my grandmother wooden house looking around for her. It was a big but very poor old house. Termites are almost in each of the pylon of my grandmother’s wooden house eating them slowly, but the house, it’s still as it was. I don’t understand why she refuses to stay with me and my family as we have better and comfortable place to stay.
Finally, I found her at the kitchen sitting alone on the floor with her both leg stretching towards. She was doing something that I’m not sure what it is. I can see her beautiful long grey hair blow by the wind. I moved closer to her as she didn’t realize I was there. When she saw me, she gave me a big smile. I giggled as I saw she smile without her teeth, very funny. I went to her and gave her a big hug. I looked at her very closely, although she has so many wrinkles, she is still beautiful and I meant it. Actually her eyeball was black before but then this time when I saw her, she had a weird green, blue and grey mixture color of her eyeball. May be despite of her age, changes like this happened, I guess.
After sitting there a while and have a chat with her, I excused my self to go home and told her that I can’t wait to see her again next week.
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A nice little portrait. I hope these corrections help a bit. I walked all through my grandmother's house looking for her.
- A nice little portrait.
- I hope these corrections help a bit.
- I walked all through my grandmother's house looking for her.
- It is a big, but very poor, old wooden house.
- Termites have been slowly eating away almost every pylon of the house; still, the house looks the same as it was.
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A nice little portrait. I hope these corrections help a bit.
I walked all through my grandmother's house looking for her. It is a big, but very poor, old wooden house. Termites have been slowly eating away almost every pylon of the house; still, the house looks the same as it was. I don’t understand why she refuses to come and live with me and my famil
I walked all through my grandmother's house looking for her. It is a big, but very poor, old wooden house. Termites have been slowly eating away almost every pylon of the house; still, the house looks the same as it was. I don’t understand why she refuses to come and live with me and my famil
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