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Saltukhan Posted 16 years ago
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Please help m to explain this

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Through consumption-oriented control and self controlling loops we ensure that we only procure, produce and transport those quantities internal and external customers have used"

What do you think about this sentence ? I am not sure what does it tell.
  

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Do you have any more context? What is being procured, produced and transported? I can't immediately see how you can procure or produce what customers have used.

  • Do you have any more context?
  • What is being procured, produced and transported?
  • I can't immediately see how you can procure or produce what customers have used.
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Do you have any more context?

What is being procured, produced and transported? I can't immediately see how you can procure or produce what customers have used.
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this is a text from a quality reports of a multinational company.

What is being procured, produced and transported is a kind of mechanical engineering product

Such as complex machines
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SaltukhanWhat is being procured, produced and transported is a kind of mechanical engineering product

Right...

In that case I don't understand what it's trying to say.
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Emotion: smile)

i understand stg
but i am not sure

we provide logistic service to our customers (in or ex) with a customer o
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SaltukhanI am not sure what does it tell it means.
Here's an explanation.

Some customers are "internal customers". Some customers are "external customers".

Both kinds of customers use only certain quantities of the product, and we know what quantities the customers use. (Presumably, they k
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Hi,

How about this?



We only send our customers the quantities they need.



Best wishes, Clive
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CliveWe only send our customers the quantities they need.

This is rather different from sending them the quantities they "have used".
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CliveWe only send our customers the quantities they need.
As I see it, that's about it -- if you're willing to leave out all the gory details about how they claim to do it! (Their system probably doesn't work anyway, but it seems they want to brag about the fact that they have one.)
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CalifJim I see you are focusing on something else - need vs. have used. I think the statement implies that the company determines need based on previous use. The "loop" thing is probably the way they detect changes in need based on changes in use.
You may be right, CJ, but I can't for the life of me understand why anyone would say they only produce "those q
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Mr WordyI can't for the life of me understand why anyone would say they only produce "those quantities ... customers have used" when they actually mean "those quantities ... customers need". The latter seems so simple and obvious.
It's from some sort of corporate report, right? So it's easy to understand why they avoid the simple and obvious. They use obfusc

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